One day there was a girl whose name was Amanda. She joined a basket ball team. Her team was called the Panthers. They were all girls. One was named Claire who was one of the best. There were two sisters named Lea and Ava who always fought. There was another Lea who was the coach’s daughter. We called the coaches daughter Thing 1 while the other Lea was thing 2. In addition, Kelly was another one of the best. Another kid was Elizabeth who never ever got a basket, so she didn't try to shoot one. While last but not least, Bellamy. She's the one that thinks she is the strongest.
One day Amanda was in a game she was hopping she would win the game while she shot a basket... she shot ten shots, Kelly shot 14, and after Kelly shot 14, she shot 100 " Yeah !!! " they shouted. It was time for half time. They went to room 206. As they settled down they were looking for a good hiding spot. Almost all of them found a really good hiding place. The coach came in the loud, squeaky door. "Squeak!" said the door. The coach came in "Surprise!" yelled team. Coach Steve said that we scared him out of his wits. He said that Amanda helped them so much that they would win.
Chapter three: the last rounds until the revealing
“YES 5,520 POINTS. WOO HOO! GO PANTHERS!” Said the team, as the crowd went WILD! It was time for Amanda to go up and play. Everyone was cheering for her and when I say everyone I mean everyone. She shot another basket while thinking of doughnuts and doughnuts started falling from the sky. Amanda and her friends talked about the game after they won. It turned out the basket ball was magic.
THE END
5 comments:
Baby, I am so proud of you. I love your titles for your chapters. GREAT WORK!!!
Very well written, great job, Amanda!
Very good job writing - it made me feel as if I were there! (Which is the sign of a good story, in my opinion.) Have fun with your blog!
Susan
Thanks for everything and I love you all. Yours Truly, Amanda Shenkman n
hey pplz!!! I might write a new version of this story!!! Hope U like it!!!
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